Showreel Continued

After speaking with Mark and Nigel I have changed part of the showreel, they were happy overall but there was one part that they recommended changing. At 18 seconds in it shows my character concept for Urban Exploration game, the camera goes from the bottom left, follows the middle concept up and then pan rights. It was said that people do not like to be led, they want to look at the images and choose what they look at however there are ways of pursuading people to look at certain parts: